「等等,還有多長?」

「就完了。」

「其實這個故事真有點無病呻吟。」

「無病呻吟?」

「對,無病呻吟。這故事本身有問題,男主角怎會事隔多年突然有動力去找女主角,而且現今世代,很難令人相信女主角的facebook一個中學朋友都沒有。阿洋,我覺得故事應該可以再好些,而且剛才的內容太平舖直敘,沒有高潮,亦沒有思考空間,很難吸引觀眾。」





「聽起來一文不值。」

「又不是一文不值,不過男主角的經歷是否有點無謂?」

「我第一次聽經歷無謂……」

「就這樣吧,再度一個有深度的故事,最好有open ending。」

「好吧。」





我離開酒吧,對阿傑的見議及批評都沒有聽入耳,因為我知道今晚這個聚會目的只是閒聊,不是傾甚麼大計。
打開手機,看到facebook有一個訊息。是Ellen Cheung Mei Yan……是張美恩!

Ellen Cheung Mei YanHi
Wong wai yeung:Oh...long time no see
Ellen Cheung Mei Yanhaha yes ar not sleep?
Wong wai yeung:still not ar drink with fd
Ellen Cheung Mei Yanicic
Wong wai yeung:haha you dont sleep?
Ellen Cheung Mei Yanmum..cant sleep




Wong wai yeung:why ar
Ellen Cheung Mei Yandont know ar
Wong wai yeung:o....
Ellen Cheung Mei Yanhv u find secondary school fd ar
Wong wai yeung:yes ar last week come out dinner
Ellen Cheung Mei Yangood ar.....
Wong wai yeung:next time you come?
Ellen Cheung Mei Yanmum...no la,,,,,
Wong wai yeung:why ar they all miss u
Ellen Cheung Mei Yanhaha really? so good i miss they too
Wong wai yeung:haha......
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan55
Wong wai yeung:5.....
Ellen Cheung Mei Yanwei wei
Wong wai yeung:yes yes




Ellen Cheung Mei Yanwhy u add me gei?
Wong wai yeung:ar....no ar, just want to see see how ar u
Ellen Cheung Mei Yanhaha, i saw your pics, your gf beautiful
Wong wai yeung:who ar?i hvnt gf wor,,,,i drive taxi,,,,,difficult find gf
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:haha why ar,,,you are not bad wor
Wong wai yeung: dont talk me la,,u lei,,,how ar?
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:me,,,haha, take my little girl to school every day lor, and go to work in a center.
Wong wai yeung:little girl very q
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:ha ha thx
Wong wai yeung:ar....
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:??
Wong wai yeung:nth la
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:yeung....
Wong wai yeung:??
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:u miss me ma?




Wong wai yeung:ar....
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:miss ma?
Wong wai yeung:ar....ofcrouse......
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:ha ha dont worry~~~~just play
Wong wai yeung:.......
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:ha ha i feel asleep la,,go bed first,,,,talk later la,,,,
Wong wai yeung:....
Wong wai yeung:wei wei
Wong wai yeung:here??
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:??
Wong wai yeung:ar..
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:??
Wong wai yeung:tomorrow free ma?
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:after 1 free
Wong wai yeung:tea ma?




Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:mum......
Wong wai yeung:not ok?
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:no ar,,,,,but,,,,,,no la,,,,next time la.....~~
Wong wai yeung:o....
Ellen Cheung Mei Yan:really need sleep la, talk later la,,,,,,bb
Wong wai yeung:bb...

即使再見面,成熟地表演
不如不見。

我腦海只有這兩句歌詞,本身對這首歌不太熟識,但依稀記得這曲旋律很傷感,又帶點無奈。回家上youtube搜尋這首歌,可是當搜尋欄那個滑鼠鍵一直眨阿眨,我竟然想不出歌名。

我在google搜尋,一隻隻字打出來,






使
再見面 成熟地表演 不如不見。

不如不見。

我已經哼到不如不見,可笑我竟不知道那就是歌名。

聽說很多情侶都想有一首屬於自己兩人的主題曲,你的名字我的姓氏、有個人、一生愛你一個,我想,我跟張美恩應該是不如不見。

過去就過去,這個我早就學懂,我知道這次是貨真價實的無病呻吟,就算我明天跟張美恩會面,結果都是喝杯咖啡,吃件蛋糕,恐怕連近況都未必會詳談。我問自己對她有半點依戀嗎,很用力地也能擠出兩滴,這兩滴都是因為我怕無伴終老所致。我知道明天又會是新一天,張美恩只是我這星期的旅遊伴侶,下周就各散東西。雖然我和她的故事未能拍成微電影,但在我能力控制下,微小說也可以吧。

「傑!我又有新故事。」

「聽聽。」

「一個的士佬一夜暴富然後成功結識大量女性的淫亂故事。結局open ending。」

「今次好好多!甚麼時候出來傾傾?」

「今晚,老地方。」
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